From, "Behind the Scene or Thirty Years of |
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Woke
“Hey!”, Lizzie's ghost yelled at Okoro.
Before the ghostly shriek could touch
Okoro’s eardrum, his hands threw a Molotov cocktail to the dress shop across
the street.
Lizzie's ghost loved the shop. Tamara
built it at the intersection of North Second Street and Lucas Avenue. Tamara
even named it “First Lady Lincoln’s Choice”. Thus, she paid homage to the
legacy of her great grandmother, Prissy.
Lizzie herself taught Prissy, a slave
girl then, her cutting and fitting techniques, which were later adored by the
First Lady Mary Todd Lincoln. Then Lizzie used to live in Saint Louis Missouri,
married to James, suffocated by his abuses, excesses and lies.
Prissy passed her learnings to her
daughter and granddaughters. Tamara has learned from her grandmother, Josephine,
Prissy’s great granddaughter. Tamara’s exceptional sartorial skill fused with
her intelligent business moves reminded Lizzie of herself.
Tamara’s burning store gave Lizzie’s
ghost the feeling of bleeding welts she got from flogging by Mr. Bingham. Cost
of the burned asset might be recovered from insurance but would miniscule
fragments of moments of Tamara’s enthusiasm constituting conspicuous countable
years into this business be recovered?
Lizzie’s ghost mustered some dust, took
form of an oldie, appeared in front of Okoro before he threw another bomb.
Okoro failed to shove her off. He groaned in anger.
Lizzie’s ghost asked, “Why are you after
this shop?”
Okoro replied, “They’ve fired my friend
Keira …”
Lizzie’s ghost expressed concern, “What
did she do?”
Okoro explained, “She took money from
the register, picked up a dress and a bonnet; she’s working towards repaying;
but they’re so impatient! The owners drive fancy cars, they’re wealthy; they
could’ve waived Keira’s a few borrowings in a year. That’s how the rich become
richer, depriving the poor; this country and its capitalism - Urgh!”
Lizzie’s ghost asked, “Do you understand
that Keira not only borrowed from the store owner but also from her poor
colleagues? If the owner loses money for Keira's and other employees’
borrowings then they might have to close the store; then there wouldn’t be any
employment for Keira and her ilk.”
Then the ghost added, “This country and
its capitalism let slaves like Horace King and me buy our freedom, became
respectively representative to the State Assembly and Modiste and Confidante to
the First Lady. Even before being manumitted, Horace was so influential because
of his building skills that the State of Alabama, later a confederate state in
deep south, amended laws, much before
the Proclamation of Emancipation, so that Horace could stay in Alabama and
build. Don’t they teach these in schools?”
Okoro stalled her, “Don’ know. (I)
haven’t been to school here. But traditionally people in this country are
racist. White cops kill black people. White folks crave here to enslave the others.”
Lizzie's ghost cast a mirage depicting
Horace King, erstwhile slave, whipping John Sella Martin, his slave then,
though both had African ancestors. She narrated how Martin endured and escaped
slavery and became an abolitionist preacher.
Okoro shrugged, “They’re born here. They
never felt estrangement, like me, from mother, five younger siblings flying
thousands of miles away from Nigeria.”
Lizzie's ghost quipped “My friend
Henry's grandfather was enslaved in Africa itself, by losing a war to another African
tribe and, was, later, sold to the Europeans by that tribe.”
She paused for few moments and added, “There's
famous Sengbe Pieh, also known as Joseph Cinque, member of Mende People of
today's Sierra Leone. Both Henry's grandfather and Cinque were enslaved before being
transported as cargo, in brig of ship to the United States, unlike your travel
by airplane. They're estranged, too.”
She continued, “My friend Frederick Douglas
was separated from his mother by their owner …"
Okoro grew impatient and reflected his
grudge further, “They weren’t betrayed by their own father. My father left my
mother and us. Until my maternal uncle prodded and goaded me to come here on a
diversity visa, I didn’t know that my father could've sponsored our visas! But
he never intended.”
Lizzie’s ghost tried to appease Okoro,
"So what? I's born slave in this country; my own father, a free White man,
made me his slave by some 1662 Virginia law. I didn't give in to feelings of
betrayal, bitterness. Instead, I built my life, helped numerous others build
their respective lives ...”
Okoro protested, “How can I build life
here? Everywhere they ask for racial identity, generously called Affirmative
action, basically identifying people by their skin tone or DNA make-up …
grossly racist.”
Lizzie’s ghost argued, “Everywhere
people are different. Igbo dominated Biafra tried to be separate from
Hausa-Fulani dominated Nigeria. Minority tribe, Ibibio doubted their stake in
proposed Biafra.”
Okoro whimpered, “It’s not about
demography. I hate White people. A white woman got my father after his arrival
here …”
Lizzie’s ghost reasoned, “It’s personal
then. You’re neither doing Keira a favor nor taking part in a social movement. Just
because Associated Press sold you a narrative about victimhood of racism
through a South African immigrant of mixed race, you’ve taken part in
fashionable violence under peer pressure, driven by your urges of vengeance.”
The ghost continued, “My time saw that
violence is White man’s way. John Brown bled Kansas, raided Harper Ferry Arsenal
for slave revolution. But he was of English, Welsh and Dutch origin. White
man’s newspaper publicized his actions.”
Then she added, “You might call me racist
for my views on John Brown and media. Won't you?”
Wee hour’s greyness covered Okoro. He
was quiet. Lizzie’s ghost begged him, “A new morning is here. Embrace it. Free
yourself from anger. Stay woke.”
Then she dissolved into thin air.
Okoro ran to his uncle’s place, finished
filling up and submitting his application form to Saint Louis Community College
for a course on telecommunication engineering; tidied himself up, went to work
in the neighborhood grocery store.
He realized, “History’s the witness of both
conflicts and construction. It’s my choice to take a side and define myself.”
Hello Sanhita. This is an interesting take on some of the history of abuse of races because of their skin color. Horrific any way you put it. I hope we don't have to choose sides like Okora. When will we realize all humans have the same value? A great response to the prompt of FREEDOM MORNING.
ReplyDeleteHello Denise.
DeleteIt seemes that I've failed to convey that oppression by humans of fellow human beings is beyond differences of skin color. Otherwise, Henry Garland's grandfather or Cinque wouldn't have been enslaved or Horace King wouldn't flog John Sella Martin.
When the sides are conflicts and constructions, yes, I'll be with Okoro on the latter.
Hi Sanhita - thank you for finishing your story with what can be achieved with a change of thought, realising it's our decision how we react to life.
ReplyDeleteThank you - a fascinating take on life as it has been ... we can get break the mold - a really good take on the prompt. All the best - Hilary
Hi Hilary - thank you for insights. I was mesmerized by the lives of Elizabeth Keckley and her peers. It was my attempt to pay homage to the legacy of enterprising men and women.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you developed your story and brought it to a conclusive change for Okoro. To be aware of the fact that the change begins within in ourselves is powerful.
Excellent!
Shalom aleichem
Aleichem Shalom Pat,
DeleteThank you for mentioning the change begins within ourselves.
My attempt was to commerate the endeavor of a enslaved woman in early nineteenth century for freedom. Her spirit teaches us that nothing is impossible if we try to bring changes in our individual insignificant lives. Then the change becomes magnificent, even historically.
So many sad moments in Humanity's history. I hope we're doing better every day, but there is so far to go. I'm glad Okoro found a way to hope and move forward.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jemi for unearthing hope amidst overwhelming negativity. Yes humans fought wars. Also yes that humans built civilization.
DeleteGood story. It reflects the fact that any conflict has two sides, that nothing is simple and there're many shades of gray in any complex situation.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Olga for your feedback. Sides are not only two but too many. As you've mentioned about complexity.
DeleteI like that the ghost inspired this young man to change his ways.
ReplyDeleteNancy
Thank you Nancy for expressing your experience of reading my flash.
DeleteGood job portraying the many sides of enslavement. Dixie jo jarchow
ReplyDeleteThanks Dixie for telling how Woke appeared to you.
DeleteI've tried to get an holistic view of slavery and racism and tried to deliver a three hundred sixty degree notion.
Hi Sanhita. I liked your take on the prompt. Got me thinking. I always maintain that truth is always one plus. Years of oppression, as I see today, can often close our minds to other sides of this multifaceted reality called disparity. Maybe, as you say, we can only begin by bringing about a change in ourselves. Yet, I would give the wearer of the shoe the benefit of doubt when they say that it pinched them real bad. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia for your thoughtful comment.
DeleteThe pinch of the shoe wearer is personal. It's neither universal nor systematic. We all are born free with equal share of opportunities. Some make more out of them. Some lags behind. Instead of blaming those who could already made it, we may try to put sone effort in improving ourselves.
A great choice of theme and an interesting response to the prompt. Reminded me of Gandhi's quote - be the change you wish to see in the world.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nilanjana for your remark. Inspired by you. If you wouldn't have given us the theme the choices would've been different.
DeleteHolding on to bitterness, no matter how warranted that bitterness might be, can be very destructive. I'm glad Okoro learned a powerful lesson.
ReplyDeleteThank you Laura for sharing your thoughts. Along with Okoro, I, too, hsve learnt the lesson.
DeleteBitterness is a dangerous, almost toxic thing to hold on to, but letting it go isn't an easy task. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Christopher for sharing your views. I do agree on toxicity of bitterness.
DeleteA great interpretation of the painting. I pray we all have the ability to step back, whether by means of a ghost, or our own consciousness when the moment calls for it. (Who's to say it isn't one and the same?) I will admit that I did, once.
ReplyDeleteIt is great to hear from you Yolanda. Sceptism is the tool that pushes all arguments towards balance.
DeleteYou've dealt with some tricky questions here Sanhita. Glad the ghost could make Okoro aware that his blind rage could do more harm than good, however justified he may be in being angry.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana for reflecting on Okoro's situation.
DeleteInteresting take on the prompt. I recognize the message of not acting blindly and hastily. Thank you for sharing a differnt take away, though some may find it difficult to see this as a grey matter.
ReplyDeleteI have relatives, distant, both black and white (though not all will addmit it) that I am related to because one of my slave ancestors was forced to produce light-skinned house slaves for the owner father, and then later the son, of the plantation.
I have white relatives with privilege, light-skinned relatives pulled in to two directions with some privileges, and I have dark skinned relatives all from a father and son sharing their slave.
Yes, there are many sides to slavery.
Great to hear from you, Toi.
DeleteLittle overwhelmed for you've shared a glimpse of personal history.
I take lessons from past (history), but while interpreting present i try not to lose bearing on anything past and present which can benefit an interest group in near future from chasm among communities.
In India Anglo (white or mixed race) community enjoys minority status. Though India is mixed race since two thousand and more years before Christ.
We were taught in school that Upper caste oppresses lower ones. In our competitive lives at school and work, all castes shine irrespective of quota, reservation (Indian diversity system) they enjoy or they're deprived of. Also, people fail irrespective of caste, creed gender, religion while enjoying privileges of quota system and while being deprived of that system.
In news we see Hindus and Muslims are always fighting. At home, they're united in holy matrimony.
Then, what is true - the discord, the harmony or both?
I'll keep trying to understand.
Hate and violence are dangerous tools in anyone's hand. Each generation sees a new light and shapes a new conclusion for history. I often wonder if we would be able to have a conversation with someone removed from our time. How different our perspectives would be. Would women and slaves look at us today and urge us to be grateful or would they demand that we continue the fight?
ReplyDeleteDeep thoughts Stephenie. Thanks for reflecting. There can be many opiniated answers to your question. Some of us, humans, stand for our individual selves, and for others too. Some seek community actions. Depending on individual personality traits and community dynamics guided by the community leaders' motive, standing up for a person may or may not resort to violence.
DeleteIf i would have been a woman from yesteryear or a slave neither i would ask for posterity's gratitude, nor i, being a skeptic alwsys doubting my reference frame and motive of others' action, would have given them feedback on their modus operandi for achieving their goal.
Equal pay for equal work (equal amount of time spent for fulfilling assigned job and actually fulfilling the target) already exists. Forced labour, labour camps does not involve selling of labors in a labor market. We must not compare apples to oranges.
Women can learn to take care of themselves, psychologically, physically, financially and whatever possible way, if they find themselves vulnerable, before jumping onto political bandwagon. That's what I do. What women should do is each individual woman's choice. It is not mine to impose.
Slaves, if possible, can buy themselves out, can seek legal intervention as slavery is illegal everywhere on the earth. But that's, again, choice of freewilled individuals. I must not determine what would others do.
Lizzie is very wise.
ReplyDeleteI never understand people who loot small businesses during riots. All they are doing is hurting people who are struggling like they are.
Violence is never the answer, but I can understand the anger behind it. The rap group Public Enemy refers to it as "the hate that hate bred."
Thank you Cie, for your comment. I really like the phrase "the hate that hate bread". Hatred breeds only further hatreds, loss and pain.
DeleteLooking forward to protests without hate but only concerns.
Seems like you put a fair amount of research into writing this story. You certainly followed the prompt and provided art inspiration.
ReplyDeleteJ Lenni Dorner~ Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference& Speculative Fiction Author
Thank you Mr. Dorner for your reflection.
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