Wednesday, April 21, 2021

Woke #FreedomMorning @WEP

Commemorating lives and times of Elizabeth Keckley, Frederick Douglas, Horace King, John Sella Martin, Henry Garnet and comparing that with ours.
From, "Behind the Scene or Thirty Years of  
Slave, and Four Years in the White House" by Elizabeth Keckley 

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“Hey!”, Lizzie's ghost yelled at Okoro.

Before the ghostly shriek could touch Okoro’s eardrum, his hands threw a Molotov cocktail to the dress shop across the street.

Lizzie's ghost loved the shop. Tamara built it at the intersection of North Second Street and Lucas Avenue. Tamara even named it “First Lady Lincoln’s Choice”. Thus, she paid homage to the legacy of her great grandmother, Prissy.

Lizzie herself taught Prissy, a slave girl then, her cutting and fitting techniques, which were later adored by the First Lady Mary Todd Lincoln. Then Lizzie used to live in Saint Louis Missouri, married to James, suffocated by his abuses, excesses and lies.

Prissy passed her learnings to her daughter and granddaughters. Tamara has learned from her grandmother, Josephine, Prissy’s great granddaughter. Tamara’s exceptional sartorial skill fused with her intelligent business moves reminded Lizzie of herself.

Tamara’s burning store gave Lizzie’s ghost the feeling of bleeding welts she got from flogging by Mr. Bingham. Cost of the burned asset might be recovered from insurance but would miniscule fragments of moments of Tamara’s enthusiasm constituting conspicuous countable years into this business be recovered?

Lizzie’s ghost mustered some dust, took form of an oldie, appeared in front of Okoro before he threw another bomb. Okoro failed to shove her off. He groaned in anger.

Lizzie’s ghost asked, “Why are you after this shop?”

Okoro replied, “They’ve fired my friend Keira …”

Lizzie’s ghost expressed concern, “What did she do?”

Okoro explained, “She took money from the register, picked up a dress and a bonnet; she’s working towards repaying; but they’re so impatient! The owners drive fancy cars, they’re wealthy; they could’ve waived Keira’s a few borrowings in a year. That’s how the rich become richer, depriving the poor; this country and its capitalism - Urgh!”

Lizzie’s ghost asked, “Do you understand that Keira not only borrowed from the store owner but also from her poor colleagues? If the owner loses money for Keira's and other employees’ borrowings then they might have to close the store; then there wouldn’t be any employment for Keira and her ilk.”

Then the ghost added, “This country and its capitalism let slaves like Horace King and me buy our freedom, became respectively representative to the State Assembly and Modiste and Confidante to the First Lady. Even before being manumitted, Horace was so influential because of his building skills that the State of Alabama, later a confederate state in deep south, amended  laws, much before the Proclamation of Emancipation, so that Horace could stay in Alabama and build. Don’t they teach these in schools?”

Okoro stalled her, “Don’ know. (I) haven’t been to school here. But traditionally people in this country are racist. White cops kill black people. White folks crave here to enslave the others.”

Lizzie's ghost cast a mirage depicting Horace King, erstwhile slave, whipping John Sella Martin, his slave then, though both had African ancestors. She narrated how Martin endured and escaped slavery and became an abolitionist preacher.

Okoro shrugged, “They’re born here. They never felt estrangement, like me, from mother, five younger siblings flying thousands of miles away from Nigeria.”

Lizzie's ghost quipped “My friend Henry's grandfather was enslaved in Africa itself, by losing a war to another African tribe and, was, later, sold to the Europeans by that tribe.”

She paused for few moments and added, “There's famous Sengbe Pieh, also known as Joseph Cinque, member of Mende People of today's Sierra Leone. Both Henry's grandfather and Cinque were enslaved before being transported as cargo, in brig of ship to the United States, unlike your travel by airplane. They're estranged, too.”

She continued, “My friend Frederick Douglas was separated from his mother by their owner …"

Okoro grew impatient and reflected his grudge further, “They weren’t betrayed by their own father. My father left my mother and us. Until my maternal uncle prodded and goaded me to come here on a diversity visa, I didn’t know that my father could've sponsored our visas! But he never intended.”

Lizzie’s ghost tried to appease Okoro, "So what? I's born slave in this country; my own father, a free White man, made me his slave by some 1662 Virginia law. I didn't give in to feelings of betrayal, bitterness. Instead, I built my life, helped numerous others build their respective lives ...”

Okoro protested, “How can I build life here? Everywhere they ask for racial identity, generously called Affirmative action, basically identifying people by their skin tone or DNA make-up … grossly racist.”

Lizzie’s ghost argued, “Everywhere people are different. Igbo dominated Biafra tried to be separate from Hausa-Fulani dominated Nigeria. Minority tribe, Ibibio doubted their stake in proposed Biafra.”

Okoro whimpered, “It’s not about demography. I hate White people. A white woman got my father after his arrival here …”

Lizzie’s ghost reasoned, “It’s personal then. You’re neither doing Keira a favor nor taking part in a social movement. Just because Associated Press sold you a narrative about victimhood of racism through a South African immigrant of mixed race, you’ve taken part in fashionable violence under peer pressure, driven by your urges of vengeance.”

The ghost continued, “My time saw that violence is White man’s way. John Brown bled Kansas, raided Harper Ferry Arsenal for slave revolution. But he was of English, Welsh and Dutch origin. White man’s newspaper publicized his actions.”

Then she added, “You might call me racist for my views on John Brown and media. Won't you?”

Wee hour’s greyness covered Okoro. He was quiet. Lizzie’s ghost begged him, “A new morning is here. Embrace it. Free yourself from anger. Stay woke.”

Then she dissolved into thin air.

Okoro ran to his uncle’s place, finished filling up and submitting his application form to Saint Louis Community College for a course on telecommunication engineering; tidied himself up, went to work in the neighborhood grocery store.

He realized, “History’s the witness of both conflicts and construction. It’s my choice to take a side and define myself.”

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Word count: 998 (nine hundred ninety-eight, with hyphenated words, without hyphenated words, 1000 [thousand]) Words.
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34 comments:

  1. Hello Sanhita. This is an interesting take on some of the history of abuse of races because of their skin color. Horrific any way you put it. I hope we don't have to choose sides like Okora. When will we realize all humans have the same value? A great response to the prompt of FREEDOM MORNING.

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    1. Hello Denise.
      It seemes that I've failed to convey that oppression by humans of fellow human beings is beyond differences of skin color. Otherwise, Henry Garland's grandfather or Cinque wouldn't have been enslaved or Horace King wouldn't flog John Sella Martin.
      When the sides are conflicts and constructions, yes, I'll be with Okoro on the latter.

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  2. Hi Sanhita - thank you for finishing your story with what can be achieved with a change of thought, realising it's our decision how we react to life.

    Thank you - a fascinating take on life as it has been ... we can get break the mold - a really good take on the prompt. All the best - Hilary

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    1. Hi Hilary - thank you for insights. I was mesmerized by the lives of Elizabeth Keckley and her peers. It was my attempt to pay homage to the legacy of enterprising men and women.

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  3. Hi,
    I like how you developed your story and brought it to a conclusive change for Okoro. To be aware of the fact that the change begins within in ourselves is powerful.
    Excellent!
    Shalom aleichem

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    1. Aleichem Shalom Pat,
      Thank you for mentioning the change begins within ourselves.
      My attempt was to commerate the endeavor of a enslaved woman in early nineteenth century for freedom. Her spirit teaches us that nothing is impossible if we try to bring changes in our individual insignificant lives. Then the change becomes magnificent, even historically.

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  4. So many sad moments in Humanity's history. I hope we're doing better every day, but there is so far to go. I'm glad Okoro found a way to hope and move forward.

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    1. Thank you Jemi for unearthing hope amidst overwhelming negativity. Yes humans fought wars. Also yes that humans built civilization.

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  5. Good story. It reflects the fact that any conflict has two sides, that nothing is simple and there're many shades of gray in any complex situation.

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    1. Thank you, Olga for your feedback. Sides are not only two but too many. As you've mentioned about complexity.

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  6. I like that the ghost inspired this young man to change his ways.
    Nancy

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    1. Thank you Nancy for expressing your experience of reading my flash.

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  7. Good job portraying the many sides of enslavement. Dixie jo jarchow

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    1. Thanks Dixie for telling how Woke appeared to you.
      I've tried to get an holistic view of slavery and racism and tried to deliver a three hundred sixty degree notion.

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  8. Hi Sanhita. I liked your take on the prompt. Got me thinking. I always maintain that truth is always one plus. Years of oppression, as I see today, can often close our minds to other sides of this multifaceted reality called disparity. Maybe, as you say, we can only begin by bringing about a change in ourselves. Yet, I would give the wearer of the shoe the benefit of doubt when they say that it pinched them real bad. Well done!

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    1. Thanks Sonia for your thoughtful comment.
      The pinch of the shoe wearer is personal. It's neither universal nor systematic. We all are born free with equal share of opportunities. Some make more out of them. Some lags behind. Instead of blaming those who could already made it, we may try to put sone effort in improving ourselves.

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  9. A great choice of theme and an interesting response to the prompt. Reminded me of Gandhi's quote - be the change you wish to see in the world.

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    1. Thank you Nilanjana for your remark. Inspired by you. If you wouldn't have given us the theme the choices would've been different.

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  10. Holding on to bitterness, no matter how warranted that bitterness might be, can be very destructive. I'm glad Okoro learned a powerful lesson.

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    1. Thank you Laura for sharing your thoughts. Along with Okoro, I, too, hsve learnt the lesson.

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  11. Bitterness is a dangerous, almost toxic thing to hold on to, but letting it go isn't an easy task. Well done.

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    1. Thank you Christopher for sharing your views. I do agree on toxicity of bitterness.

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  12. A great interpretation of the painting. I pray we all have the ability to step back, whether by means of a ghost, or our own consciousness when the moment calls for it. (Who's to say it isn't one and the same?) I will admit that I did, once.

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    1. It is great to hear from you Yolanda. Sceptism is the tool that pushes all arguments towards balance.

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  13. You've dealt with some tricky questions here Sanhita. Glad the ghost could make Okoro aware that his blind rage could do more harm than good, however justified he may be in being angry.

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  14. Interesting take on the prompt. I recognize the message of not acting blindly and hastily. Thank you for sharing a differnt take away, though some may find it difficult to see this as a grey matter.
    I have relatives, distant, both black and white (though not all will addmit it) that I am related to because one of my slave ancestors was forced to produce light-skinned house slaves for the owner father, and then later the son, of the plantation.
    I have white relatives with privilege, light-skinned relatives pulled in to two directions with some privileges, and I have dark skinned relatives all from a father and son sharing their slave.
    Yes, there are many sides to slavery.

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    1. Great to hear from you, Toi.
      Little overwhelmed for you've shared a glimpse of personal history.
      I take lessons from past (history), but while interpreting present i try not to lose bearing on anything past and present which can benefit an interest group in near future from chasm among communities.
      In India Anglo (white or mixed race) community enjoys minority status. Though India is mixed race since two thousand and more years before Christ.
      We were taught in school that Upper caste oppresses lower ones. In our competitive lives at school and work, all castes shine irrespective of quota, reservation (Indian diversity system) they enjoy or they're deprived of. Also, people fail irrespective of caste, creed gender, religion while enjoying privileges of quota system and while being deprived of that system.
      In news we see Hindus and Muslims are always fighting. At home, they're united in holy matrimony.
      Then, what is true - the discord, the harmony or both?
      I'll keep trying to understand.

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  15. Hate and violence are dangerous tools in anyone's hand. Each generation sees a new light and shapes a new conclusion for history. I often wonder if we would be able to have a conversation with someone removed from our time. How different our perspectives would be. Would women and slaves look at us today and urge us to be grateful or would they demand that we continue the fight?

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    1. Deep thoughts Stephenie. Thanks for reflecting. There can be many opiniated answers to your question. Some of us, humans, stand for our individual selves, and for others too. Some seek community actions. Depending on individual personality traits and community dynamics guided by the community leaders' motive, standing up for a person may or may not resort to violence.
      If i would have been a woman from yesteryear or a slave neither i would ask for posterity's gratitude, nor i, being a skeptic alwsys doubting my reference frame and motive of others' action, would have given them feedback on their modus operandi for achieving their goal.
      Equal pay for equal work (equal amount of time spent for fulfilling assigned job and actually fulfilling the target) already exists. Forced labour, labour camps does not involve selling of labors in a labor market. We must not compare apples to oranges.
      Women can learn to take care of themselves, psychologically, physically, financially and whatever possible way, if they find themselves vulnerable, before jumping onto political bandwagon. That's what I do. What women should do is each individual woman's choice. It is not mine to impose.
      Slaves, if possible, can buy themselves out, can seek legal intervention as slavery is illegal everywhere on the earth. But that's, again, choice of freewilled individuals. I must not determine what would others do.

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  16. Lizzie is very wise.
    I never understand people who loot small businesses during riots. All they are doing is hurting people who are struggling like they are.
    Violence is never the answer, but I can understand the anger behind it. The rap group Public Enemy refers to it as "the hate that hate bred."

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    1. Thank you Cie, for your comment. I really like the phrase "the hate that hate bread". Hatred breeds only further hatreds, loss and pain.
      Looking forward to protests without hate but only concerns.

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  17. Seems like you put a fair amount of research into writing this story. You certainly followed the prompt and provided art inspiration.

    J Lenni Dorner~ Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference& Speculative Fiction Author

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