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Wednesday, June 17, 2020

Out of Mind

Nothing else but The Story

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A car is honking in the neighborhood. Mouli feels as if she has just woken up.

She thinks of shutting the window. But cannot. The glass pane has been imploded by raging Aamphan. Since then her bed, bedroom floor has been spread with glass shards; flooded with storm water gushing through the hollow of aluminum window frame. Flood water surged through kitchen and dining area to living room and apartment entrance.

Startled by the sound of shattering windowpane, in the early evening, Mouli left her home office, in between living room and kitchen area, in awe. Reaching bedroom, she has obtained deep cuts on planters of her feet.

By this time, the storm water has engulfed the home power back up system by the apartment entrance; made it defunct, in exchange became electrified. It shocked Mouli’s submerged feet; made her climb on the bed; squirm at a corner away from hollow of the window.

Darkness, dampness, dull inactive passage of fathomless time accompanied by crazily forceful tropical cyclone continuing over six hours at a crushing hourly speed of two hundred kilometers seized Mouli’s consciousness, sealed her eyes.    

Earlier in the day, the client has sent page to Mouli’s team. It was Kushal’s shift; hence, he was responsible for acknowledging receipt of the page within an hour of receiving it. Mouli waited for half an hour for Kushal’s response, then she called him.  After several calls over an hour, he picked up and asked, “Have you responded to the page?”.

Mouli reminded him, “Since I’m your manager… I must, hence, I saved the deadline. Now start fixing the bug. It’s in client’s B2B transaction module.”  

Hanging up she sighed, “Quite unprofessional!”

Kushal gave up after two hours of effort or its pretention, around standard siesta time.

Then, Mouli had left with no choice but herself fixing the code timely to secure earning few thousand dollars for her employer and enhancing business relationship with the client. Otherwise, her employer would lose the business, incurring millions of dollars in penalty for damages caused to client’s business by incompetence of Mouli’s team, abiding by the agreement.

Hence, Mouli scanned through lines of the code, found the block of method that had been manipulated by client’s latest requirement; checked the methods linked to the changed method; figured out how to tweak them as necessary by logic. Yet she could not fix the code.

Power supply of entire city was turned off since the landfall of the cyclone, late in afternoon. Mouli’s power back up system kept her laptop and internet router alive for few hours, till her bedroom window broke. Then, she received text messages from her internet service provider intimating breakdown in internet and cell phone services. She surmised that all the electric poles and posts, connecting optic fiber cables carrying internet signals, were probably uprooted.

Without electricity, broadband, mobile data, communication became impossible, even with respective service agencies. Nor Mouli could resume resolving the business problem in hand. She helplessly observed tampering of her hitherto impeccable reputation of punctuality. Imagining the consequences of missing delivery to her employer, ensuing cascading effect on her career, then on her life, life seemed to be decimated.

Life had already been at its knees due to lockdown. Mouli had spent no weekend with her parents, siblings, or friends, at her place, or at their respective places, or someplace away from the city, for months, maintaining social distancing. Constant view of ugly erratic hardscape of maximizing profit per square feet, without considering comforts and convenience of dwellers and durability of structure constructed, strained her neurons, fatigued her muscles. Even glass-iron-concrete box, called office, appeared a soothing isolation from noise in surroundings and thoughts.

Probably, the shed of neighborhood car parking was blown off. The crown of Mahogany tree standing by the parking has been fallen on the cars. Consequently, cars started honking as alarm.

Nobody dared going outside to stop the alarms.

The honking has shaken Mouli to senses, probably. She feels like being drowned in her own perspiration, smelling like vinegar. Her hands are immovable, like being in a straitjacket, of a flex banner printed with, “Honking won’t widen the street.”

After Mouli shouted it, once, a lady left her car, rushed to Mouli to respond with slur. The street was inundated by water from roadside drain, failed to hold rainwater from previous nights, fortnights, yielding invisible potholes. The lady stepped into one of them, fell and was drowned. Without underground sewerage canals, as wide and high as two-lane street, overflowing drains, consequent road corrosion creating potholes and loss of lives remain inevitable.

Nobody sued the authorities, provider of roads, though dilapidated, yet social benefits, for citizens, hence, like royal, feudal endowment, beyond reproach.

She has thought of renting ad spaces to flash her anti-honking slogan; yet abandoned the idea. Electronic billboards are few.

Someone copied her slogan, made a cheap campaign with flex banner, fitted over iron frames or wooden batons, which has just been torn by storm wind, gushing at hundred and twenty something miles per hour, dropped in front of a moving truck and covered its windscreen.

The truck failed to sense total loss of visibility as visibility was almost nil over quarter of a day, drenched in Amphan rain. It stumbled upon iron traffic barriers lying flat on the street, slammed earlier, from their upright positions, to the street floor by storm wind, due to lack of weight of sand sacks on their respective bottoms.

The truck lost control; rammed into Mouli’s apartment building. The impact made the banner fly from the trucks’ windscreen, enter Mouli’s bedroom through the broken window and whirled around Mouli.

As Mouli struggles to free herself from the wrap, a piece of left-over wooden baton, protruding from the flex banner’s edge, pierces her left eye. Rolling in pain, she crosses the edge of the window of her seventeenth-floor apartment.

Subsequent thud on the ground remains unheard. Rain washes away splashed flesh, blood, warmth.


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I finished writing before Aamphan. After Aamphan I changed it, keeping the ending intact. After demise of actor Sushant Singh Rajput, I changed the ending further so that it would not appear to be mimic of the tragedy. 
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WORD COUNT: 1000 (One thousand) [Including all hyphenated words, else 997 (Nine hundred ninety seven)] 
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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

An Apparition @ WEP Entry # Antique Vase

My days start with pots and pans. As they roll further, I push 'l' after 'p' and cook stories. :)
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“If you dare break the glass around me, dare peep inside …… beyond the pride, which you call luster ..…. beyond two and half a millennium - stashed, trapped, within my pores … born of clay, burnt of fire, touched by a few twigs ..… I’m all Memory …... of decays of my long-gone siblings and clan .....”
Through this outburst she confided for the first time. In a summer afternoon. I was sitting before her, appreciating red and black figurines on her lustrous black surface. At Northern Hall in this Villa de Papyri replica. Off duty.
If lucky, my post on duty used to be her. Else, I used to spend awhile with her after my shift. That “awhile” used to range from half an hour to hours, depending on my other jobs and family engagements, since my first visit here, half a decade ago, to reconnect to my Mediterranean roots.
Since that summer afternoon she used to sprinkle at me bits and pieces of her ancestry. Her passage from a Mediterranean island to this Pacific coast in New World.
That summer I spent several afternoons with her. My son was camping North. His mother was doing afternoon shifts at one job and evening on the other. I had only day and evening shifts in all my jobs.
I started here anew doing odd jobs since I had fled a military coup d'état, more than a decade ago. One of my jobs was at a Gas Station on Sunset Boulevard.
Mr. Benenio Klavan, my rescuer, used to be a regular customer there. He visited Turkey several times on journalistic assignments. He used to talk about home a lot. Once he suggested, “Why don’t you visit Getty Villa on PCH, Rafiq? You might feel at home. The ancient odor of life that you miss here, you may feel that there.”
Therefore, there occurred my first visit to this repository of ancient Mediterranean life. I still have my first five-dollar parking stub.
Soon after, I sought employment with them. Because of my Mediterranean memory they hired me.
Then came repatriation. Intellectual property laws were making the vase to return to Athens, Greece.
I got my ultimate opportunity to hold her in my arms. She sighed, “This’ so much wrong...”
I had no time to sooth her. Instead, I started wrapping her with bubble wraps. Then I peeped inside to fill it with paper shreds and met Eutropios, the potter.

In soft light of early morning, Eutropios was offering a prayer to Athena. Euaristos, his son, joined him. After that the father started wheeling vases. The son was drawing and curving on the surface of already dried pots, applying slip on them.
Eutropios left the wheel to knead some fresh clay out of natural pool. Euaristos took his turn on the wheel to scrub off excess mud from previous day’s sundried pots and vases.
Methodios, Eutropios’ apprentice, had just arrived. He brought some natural clay and was pacing towards the natural pool to sink it for getting rid of its impurities.
Suddenly, Methodios threw off the clay; rushed to the kiln, took out the firewood splinters from hearth, splashed water on it. Immediately the kiln was full of fume instead of flame. There were pots and vases inside for first baking. With sudden drop in temperature they all became crudely baked. Euaristos murmured, sticking his eyes on the wheel, “What’s wrong with you?”
Methodios spat his answer, “Wrong you are and your father. All you worship is Athena and Hestia. You must obey Circe. She sent me, Omodamos, to convey her wishes.”
Eutropios listened and asked Methodios, “Take the day off.”

Yet, Methodios stood stubborn by the kiln. Eutropios ignored him, prayed to Hestia, adjusted the flame in kiln and placed next batch of potteries for burning.
Methodios shrieked, “You didn’t pay heed!”

Then, he brought a log from the riverbank, rammed the kiln with it. Fumes started pouring out through cracks of the shattered kiln. Methodios grumbled, “Lesson from Syntribos.”
Leaving all work in hand, father and son started mending the kiln. They were too busy to mind Methodios.
Worshiping Hestia, again, Eutropios ignited the kiln. Euaristos put another batch of potteries in it.

Methodios charred the kiln wholly by airing it too fast and chuckled, “A spank from Asbestos.”
Euaristos ran to the pool, brought pales of water, drenched the kiln to cool it down.
Then, Eutropios asked for Hestia’s forgiveness. Methodios responded by hammering the whole kiln muttering, “Wrath of Smaragos!”
Sun was down. Eutropios called it a day.
Following morning, praying before Athena, as usual, he started working. Methodios pulverized the kiln, shouting, “Sabaktes’ ultimatum.”
Then he ran away.
Eutropios had to, hence, started rebuilding the kiln. Euaristos helped his father by mining fresh mud, carrying it to the workshop, sifting pebbles from finer clay, kneading lumps and delivering them to the building spot.
Once the kiln was ready to use, Circe appeared before Eutropios. She demanded, “Obey me.”

Eutropios denied. Circe turned Euaristos into a mouse.
Heartbroken, Eutropios brought the mouse home. At night, he dreamed that Athena had sent Hermes. Hermes whispered warnings about Circe into his ears and gave him an armlet of moly to ward of Circe’s magic.
Following morning, Circe appeared at Eutropios’ workshop. Before She could make a move, he grabbed her, dragged her to the kiln, tied her up on the hearth, as if he was going to set her afire.
Scared, Circe murmured, “Untie me. I’ll render such carnal pleasure that no nymph could ever render.”
Eutropios remembered all words of Hermes; hence, ignored Circe’s alluring advances. Instead, he made Circe swear in names of Gods, “I won’t further meddle with your affairs.”
Before leaving She brought Euaristos back to his human form.
Worshiping Athena and Hestia, Eutropios and Euaristos resumed turning wheel and burning pots.
I finished packing and sent off the vase towards its land of origin, among its pugnacious ancestors.
Also available at Google Books
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Thank You Denise for guiding me through the details about participating in WEP Flash Fiction Challenges.
WORD COUNT: 993
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